Come take a sip of honeyed nectar
upon flushed flesh feast on
me
Feed your need drench me in your
ecstasy, let our bodies intertwine
as we fuck to lustful rhyme
set the rhythm
take your time, cum
on baby
no holds barred
make me scream your name out hard
enter deep, feed from my sweet release
Author notes
Acrostic
For you hon..one naughty friend to another
Love ~sugar~ xxx
A contest entry
- SOCK IT TO ME, BABY! MAKE ME HARD WITHOUT THE HELP OF VIAGRA! by Swtpoetryman.
600 points, ended July 23, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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IT LOOKS LIKE I'M NOT THE ONLY ONE - WHO LIKES TO PLAY TO YOUR WRITING!
HE! HE! It looks like you made - at least - 2 of us hard with this one, Hon - and a few others wet, too! YUMMY! what time is TEA, Baby?
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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What can I say? Guilty as charged 
Why stop at TEA baby?
Just a little fun
Love you baby ~sugar~ xxx
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Hey, I'm trying write here!!!!!!!! Oh, shit, too late, the monitor is all wet [no, it's not water].
Too hot to bear, sweet Sugar, you are the best...
I love you,
B
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Damn! B what you been doing while you should have been writing to get ya PC in such a mess?
I appreciate you reading as always
I love you too B
~sugar~
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Shakes head in disbelief
Sugar you are HOT girl
good luck with this on. Emma
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Sorry Em Thank you I am HOT
~sugar~ 
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*wipes brow*
It has gotten suddenly hot in here. Sis, I swear, you're gonna give me heart palpitations. Seriously, nice & erotic words there.
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I have got the resuss team on stand by should you require any assistance.
~sugar~
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you know earl going to kill over sug don't you this was smoking hon let me go take a peek whats going on here oh boy
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What can I say sis he brings out the in me. Glad you enjoyed hon
~sugar~
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Great hot acrostic hun
Very erotic
Earl will love this one
Good luck in the contest
Julie
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Thanks hon...Just a little fun.
~sugar~
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