he glances
behind aviators
raised eyebrows
pupils
black as night
and wider
claw holes
in his flawless face
hate,
passionate,
bubbles
from his parted lips
blooms in the air
he orders whiskey
A contest entry
- Hate by sheltered.
600 points, ended August 4, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - HATE HATE HATE HATE by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
300 points, ended July 28, 2008, 36 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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WOW. This was good. So describeing for such a short poem. I wished it was longer because it was really good. By the time i jumpped out of my seat it was over
. Thanks for entering my contest. I wish you the best of luck.! :| :| :| :|
..<3..
Shelly -
"claw holes
in his flawless face"...
that's the kicker for me...
love it. lol -
I fuckin' love this.
Such great images that I can so relate to.
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thank you
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