My Heart is artistic and very eccentric,
Lying hopelessly devoted to you.
If you feel the same way then you’ll know what to say,
If you see things like this in me too.
In you I see pride a strong spirit inside,
But incomplete in the way I am too.
We are dreamers at Heart with no sense to apart,
And that gift only comes in a few.
We each have a power that all others desire,
And that power is our radiance of grace.
We have struggled through pain in order to maintain,
And stuck together cause we see face to face.
In your eyes there’s a glow coming straight from your soul,
That sends chills running down my spine.
If you had all the Stars spread from Venus to Mars,
All put together couldn’t reduce your shine.
Your soft luscious lips makes me wanna do flips,
So My Heart starts to pick up its pace.
We have a magical kiss forming genuine bliss,
That no other in this World could replace.
Your cute little nose, symbolizes a rose,
As it rest between your soft silky cheeks.
It’s scent lures me in for the magic to begin,
As if my lips were a desire that it seeks.
Your smile is so clear it replaces my fear,
With the love you put in me each day.
500 days by your side learning the ways of your mind,
And your heart is for what I still pray.
Your mutual respect in which makes you a good friend,
Your radiance of love in which will never end.
Your thoughtfulness of others always troubling your mind,
So you go out of your way to make sure that their fine.
Your knowledge of struggle when Life seldom goes your way,
But you still throw on a smile and make the best of your day.
Each live their life as a fairytale made up of their dreams,
But you don’t lose your hope no matter how hard life seems.
You're loyal, understanding, smart,
You're honest with a caring heart.
You're special rare, so sweet and fair,
I cant live Life if you're not there.
You're laid-back and reliable,
So irresistibly beautiful.
You're open-minded, negatively-blinded,
And an attitude that’s so chilled out and cool.
You're so devoted and so strong,
You will admit when you are wrong.
You are so descent and so wise,
Lifting your grace up to the skies.
Everything about you,
And all of you I know.
Makes it harder and harder brings me farther and farther,
In love with you from head to toe.
So just follow your Heart and let it take you away,
The other side of the mountain lies a brighter day.
I know I’m not perfect and will never be,
But just give me a chance and you’ll see how perfect can be.
So thanks for all you’ve changed my life,
You’ve helped more than you know.
I was a Hopeless Half in wonder,
But now you’ve made me whole.
So please take this poem and hold it tight,
I pray it never part.
I’ll cherish yours if you do mine,
Cause I just gave you My Heart.
A contest entry
- Make me want to fall in love (2) by Spiritual Soul.
1000 points, ended July 19, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sappy love poems by crazymomma.
800 points, ended July 27, 2008, 64 entries
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Comments
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this was a very melodic poem...great flow...great rhyme...
but, you forgot your authors notes -
Thank you for your beautifully spoken submittal, good luck in my contest, Josie
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This was very sweet and touching. There were several places where you used "your" and it should have "you're' and that took away from it for me. Thanks for entering and good luck
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wow this was beautiful! SO much love and devotion said in this piece, I just loved it. The rhyming was great and it flowed so well. Thanks for your entry!
Blessings,
~Michaela~


