I'm singled out,
I'm all alone,
In this little corner
so far from the door,
I wanna go out,
I wanna break free
but you're right infront of me,
I wanna leave
But you won't let me,
You keep sayin it's all about me,
but when it comes to reality,
You don't care at all
ur planning your suicide right down the hall.
You're gonna leave,
That day i'll finally be free
What do ya think??
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Oh My....
Such anger, intensity, emotion, and hatred for another is felt here. I can only say I am glad I am not the one who is so loathed. It is a great write with good meter nice rythme and pretty flow. Keep penning away oh emo one I loved it. ~mandie~ -
nice poem. i love the figurative example. using the room to demonstrate you life. its really nicely done. i agree. hypocrites are not very good. good write.
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This is FULL of emotion. Great poem indeed.
Third to last line, you abbreviate you're into ur. It's distracting.
Other than that, amazing job.
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