L.I.N.D.S.E.Y
loving you were, my best friend
in your casket, now our dreams end
I miss your smile, your being though hard to say
never thought you would vanish in middle of the day
hard to believe, your soul departed
best friends till the end, that we used to say
every tears that drops, is hardly sweet
bitter they are, they burning my cheeks
you lost me, my heart now bleeds
whatever form you soul take,
you are still my only sweet
Author notes
A second piece I want to enter into this contest, I hope this will help. Sorry for you loss
In a list
A contest entry
- In loving memory.... by CascadingSakura.
600 points, ended July 27, 9 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think?
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thanks for the oportunity to present this piece, I wish you the best of luck and hope you cope with peace and love, God bless you and her soul -
Oh my gosh
Sigh this is sadly and painfully beautiful goodluck in this contest best wishes always
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'every tears that drops, is hardly sweet
bitter they are, they burning my cheeks'
what a line
This is another great poem.
Keep writing em man.
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Thank you so much for this, its beautiful. It brought tears to my eyes. Wonderful job, thanks again for entering it, it's greatly appreciated!! Best of luck
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