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My Precious Past




Mine... All mine... My precious...MY PRECIOUS.

Forever, focused on the foe--self,

left alone in a state of solitude, centuries

of sordid and sick dreams, the ring gave reason,

for this once hobbit hermit, to live.

Come to me my precious... come to me...

The dawn of destruction, filtered through caves

and cracked walls, of a crazed mind too alone

to understand compassion and self control.

Precious, possessed a personal chance of greatness,

without a living soul, without a commitment.

It's MINE!

Just a memory of mooreland and marshes,

stretching out for miles, grass on gnarled feet

soft and soothing, raindrops and snowstorms,

upon the lonesome road, but so very sweet -

these days before his precious possessed him,

were full of a denying hobbit's dreams.

Author notes

I love Gollum.

And I do, he's my favourite character.
Hope this is okay.

Midnight-x-Rose
ya this is about gollum hehe love him.

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  • Dreamana
    August 1, 2008
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    This really moved me, and truly captured just the sort of thing that I had in mind when I created the contest. I particularly loved:

    'Just a memory of mooreland and marshes,
    stretching out for miles, grass on gnarled feet
    soft and soothing, raindrops and snowstorms,
    upon the lonesome road, but so very sweet'

    Beautifully written. Thank you for entering.


  • lindaburns gold member
    July 22, 2008

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    Good enough to have been done by Tolkien. Think I will check out the contest.

  • She Stole My Voice
    July 20, 2008

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    I love the imagery in this piece;
    but I honestly don't think this is what I'm looking for.
    Thank you for entering
    and good luck in the other contest.



    ~Princess of Shadows~


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    July 20, 2008

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    lol, you know i kind of like him as well in this story, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest