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Fading Fast


 
Razor's steel cuts effortlessly through skin
as crimson heartache is spilled upon the floor
intermingled with cascading tears of regret
this pool of dying life created at my feet

Flowing freely, my pain is released
fresh wound becomes companion, to scars of old
forever cast upon this flesh I wear
yet concealed from the world outside myself.

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Prompt: 2

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A contest entry

Is all hope lost when hearts are abandoned?

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  • XxemohatexX
    July 19, 2008

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    wow

    this is so good you ar4e a great and talented writer i love this poem and give you the best of look in my contest thanks for entering so much emotion in my contest


  • Angelflower
    July 19, 2008
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    Darkly beautiful yet, makes me a little nervous as well.. You did a wonderful job with the prompt hun.. The emotion was really intense and heartfelt.. It seemed like a scream from a soul tormented by life.. You did wonderfully.*hugs*


    Angel
    ♥


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    July 18, 2008

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    thi is amazing love,
    i really do love it! its breath taking,
    and i relate 100%,
    all my love,
    kitty xxx


  • Claudia Incognito
    July 18, 2008

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    I love this...I don't know why... I've been acting strange all week and maybe just reading poetry is getting me through everything I'm blocking out though. ^^ good luck in the contest <3