Creature,
Lurking in the dark.
Awakening during the,
Full moon.
To haunt the earth.
Under the stars,
Searching the ground.
I am the animal,
Haunting you.
I am the animal,
After you.
Author notes
A poem, not about my life, not about my emotions :3 so, bleh. Enjoy hopefully.
A contest entry
- Musical Video Masterpiece by Riftkin.
800 points, ended July 20, 5 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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Whootidy whoot whoot! ^^ Loved it. You knows why. ^^ Oh and so did Mr. Bun bun! http://photobucket.com/image/bunny/leonard1234/bunny.jpg?o=9
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wow its very chilling.. i love it!
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thank you for entering my contest Riftkin
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Not too bad, could use some structure work though. Actually it is the Three Days Grace song Animal I have become, only in reverse...Good write!
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structure? What structure? I use none. It's my own format, that always changes. It never is the same, it's too hard to make it the same. =P but thanks for the critique.
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The last line is my favorite. It makes you want to look behind your shoulder. Good work here. Nicely penned.
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Pretty scary, only wish tere was more detail. But hey, it's not my poem, and you wrote it well. good luck in the contest.
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lol..oh i wasnt funny btw..it was really good!its so short but still got alot of scare into it!
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Spooky, spooky stuff here! I am remined most of all of a lycanthrope (werewolf). very short, but very deftly done poem! bravo... bravo...
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