My heart, you sequester
captive,
lies my love
contently in abandon's whispers.
Kiss tender it's needs
my darling,
Allow me to embrace thy soul
as you have encompassed mine,
Beautiful,
this emotion
oh how sweetly it sings,
May the melody bestow us
tomorrow's chorus of promise,
Solemn wishes
carried softly as grace of an angel,
shall it let us dwell
in devotion's music
forevermore.
Author notes
Word bank-
A contest entry
- 12 Word, Word Bank. by Poetryintheblood.
425 points, ended July 24, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A most beautiful & Tender composition--Well worthy of the award!--Well Done & Congratulations!
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Thank you, much appreciated.
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Very well penned. Congrats on HM
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Thank you, thank you oh dear one lol
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This is very good. So soft and sweet. You have a talented pin.
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Thank you my friend for your kind comment.
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Thank you for your lovely entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Thank you for HM, I enjoyed your contest.
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Brilliant
I really enjoyed this and found it quite refreshing to find a fellow poet with so much talent. Thank you for being here.
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I'm honored by your kind comment. Much appreciated, thank you.
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Love it!! Softly sensual and beautifully penned... I have no idea what were even the wordbank words it's so seemless!
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Thank you dear! I'm glad you liked it! You're always so kind.
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great use of the word bank.
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Aww thank you dear one
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Sensual and filled with love... Wonderfully done!
Ken
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Thanks Ken, glad you enjoyed it my friend.
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Excellent
Wow, such a very powerful creation. So very well done. Many blessings in the contest.
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Thank you dear brother, glad you enjoyed it.
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This is from a word bank? 
This is incredible!! I know when I get around to doing another cento, and do one from you, there is a line or two in this one that will be used!
Sis this is amazing! I love it!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
P.S. Yes, forevermore works quite nicely when thought of this way!!
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Yeppers hehe You know how I love those word banks..couldn't resist. I'm happy you like it Sis. Means alot to me.
& love
Linda (p.s. what's a cento?) lol I'm blonde, don't confuse me hehe
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