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[I Love You]

Te quiero [[Spanish]]
Je vous aime [[French]]
  Ich liebe Sie [[German]]
  L'amo [[Italian]]
    Ik hou van u [[Dutch]]
    Amo-o [[Portugeese]]
      я люблю Вас [[Russian]]
      Jeg elsker deg [[Norwegain]]
        我爱你 [[Chinese]]
        私はあなたを愛しています [[Japanese]]
          I love you [[English]]

          All different languages,
          Only one meaning.
          Love:
          They can ruin a person’s life,
          Or save it…
          You've saved mine.
          I promise to love you forever,
          for every day of forever.

          Te quiero [[Spanish]]
        Je vous aime [[French]]
        Ich liebe Sie [[German]]
      L'amo [[Italian]]
      Ik hou van u [[Dutch]]
    Amo-o [[Portugeese]]
    я люблю Вас [[Russian]]
  Jeg elsker deg [[Norwegain]]
  我爱你 [[Chinese]]
私はあなたを愛しています [[Japanese]]
I love you [[English]]

Author notes

This reminds me of Edward and Bella from the Twilight series. And I actually put the lines that he proposed with in my poem because they were so romantic. I <3 Edward Cullen!

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  • Antebellum
    March 26, 2009
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    this is beautiful.
    AMAZING i love it!


  • pyarkavaada
    January 22, 2009
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    I love this and how you put it all in different languages, its amazing! great job


  • Lonely Christina
    November 16, 2008
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    aaawwwwww!!!


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    August 27, 2008

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    OMG I was looking for all these ways to say I love you last night!!



    This is such a cool piece
    I love the languages and the extract from twilight too

    Good luck with your entry ^^
    Claire x


  • Forgot2Breathe
    August 21, 2008

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    this is beautiful
    and so amazing
    those three words
    even in different languages
    mean so damn much


  • Valley Girl silver member
    August 8, 2008
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    I have read this one before Missa. Very creative. Thanks for entering.


  • TizMoi
    August 6, 2008

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    Really origianl and very well written indeed with the different language uses, all of which have a universal meaning. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.


  • offlimits
    July 31, 2008
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    thanks

    so nice thank you
    good luck
    god bless
    cassie


  • xXxIceQueenxXx
    July 30, 2008

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    Creative poem! I was really excited about the French because I love the language and just finished a college French course. This poem is short and sweet.

    Thank you for taking the time to enter it into my contest!


  • crazymomma
    July 26, 2008

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    I really enjoyed how you used so many different languages here. It really does mean the same no matter how it is said. Thanks for entering and good luck


  • XBeautiful MistakeX
    July 24, 2008

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    I love the different languages!! Great job!! there is much love to be had in this poem <3 Thank you mucho for entering!!

    Oz


  • quietgirl13
    July 22, 2008
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    This is really unique and original. I like how you used all of the different languages


  • SweetNessaLynn
    July 20, 2008

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    This is so wonderful and I have a love for all languages so I really like how you have done this poem. Best of luck in the contests. Best wishes, -Nessa


  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    July 20, 2008
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    Thank you for your lovely entry , good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Crazy9Piano8Freak
    July 18, 2008
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    I like this one. That's a lot of languages! I saw the first two lines before I clicked on this, and I was like, hmmm I wonder if there's German! another way to say it in German if you don't want it formal is 'Ich liebe dich'. Just so you know! the Sie form is formal... okay enough with the German lesson! Great job, ich liebe es! (i love it!)

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