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[white water rapids]




white water rapids
its true nature in pursuit
arriving at last






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Prompt: "White Water" for picture, click contest =>
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2411761

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  • iamlost gold member
    August 7, 2008

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    Oooh, I love that last line, beautiful! Short, but so captivating, this is a very amazing poem.
    Well penned.

    ~lost


  • Swan song gold member
    July 19, 2008
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    Excellent hiaku here loved it thank you for entering


  • KayJay
    July 18, 2008

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    Nicely done... love water in persuit... such a flow (no pun intended )... Best of luck...
    Ken


  • sailor ptolema
    July 18, 2008

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    ohhh! I like this 'ku Seems we both wrote haiku for this; but it was such a great picture to write one for I really enjoyed this!!!

    ~Pt