bittersweet lust
contemplating embrace
sequestered by her parents
she holds my life captive
my heart in her left hand
and my soul in her right
the only one I call darling
love of my life
her heart whispers to me
and blows tender kisses from afar
forever beautiful
forevermore my angel
Author notes
Loved this word bank...describes exactly what I'm going through...I hate being a part from her...seems like we can never be together. I love you Lisa.
I hope you enjoy this read...I had tears writing it...good luck to other contestants...
A contest entry
- AP's Best Prewrites by lowercase prelude.
800 points, ended July 22, 2008, 75 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Release Me by sensualbutterfly.
300 points, ended July 28, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 12 Word, Word Bank. by Poetryintheblood.
425 points, ended July 24, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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Thank you for your lovely entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Nice job! I feel your pain of being apart from the one you love. Thank you for entering
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beautiful poem about that "special someone" and wanting to be with them
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i enjoyed this and i had tears reading it... your emotions show very well through these words! great write hon and good luck in the contests...
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wow wow wow!
this is a beauuuutiful write! it was simple and filled with so much emotions! it was so deep and touching! this piece just moved me!
a lovely dedication to a lovely person! keep penning, and smile always! don't let anything put a frown on your face aight!
much love,
Ranji
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great poem... real emotion... i really get where you are comming from... keep up the great writing man... 8/10
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