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Tainted by Sonnets

I used to whisper behind me,
seeing your eyes as they'd
shine false love into my soul
and your fingers as they
close around my neck;
"lovingly".

 

I look for where I went wrong,

what made you think

you could lie to my face

and break my heart into

these pieces of dirt;

my innocence.

 

You tainted me with pretty

sonnets filled with sappy words,

too big to be comprehended and

I'd rather gnash my gums in

than waste time dwindling behind;

it's gone.

 

The past is the past, a dumb

thing I don't need to let hollow

out my future, my future

that you aren't in and I won't

cry because it doesn't matter;

you don't matter. 

Author notes

-I'd rather chew on broken glass than
keep living in the past and waste my time
analyzing words i know you didn't mean.

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  • innocence jaded.xx
    August 28, 2008
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    Wowww, dearest, this is incredibly powerful ! I loved every word =] You penned such an incredible emotion from that prompt, and wrote it beautifully.

    -I look for where I went wrong,

    what made you think

    you could lie to my face

    and break my heart into

    these pieces of dirt;

    my innocence.
    ...

    Hah! I hear ya. Amazingly worded, love. Keep it up & thanks for entering ! ♥


  • HaleyMary
    July 18, 2008

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    Powerful write, Austyn. This expressed lots of emotion and had a feeling of strength to it. It makes me think of people letting go of the past and moving on. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.


  • Good Riddance
    July 18, 2008
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    powerful!

    oh and nice new pic. cute =]


  • For You. I Cry.
    July 18, 2008
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    = ) absolutley beautiful babe

    amazing job

    good luck = )

    iloveyou <3

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