Drunk after a night of hanging out with girlfriends it was late and I was fuckable. Single but knowing where to turn, my hearts little desire was only a phone call away. So I sat to read some poetry on erotica and play some music while I wait. Far too much energy to just sit pulsing through me as he walks in the door, wine bottle in hand. Already I am pleased. Does not take much and I decide we need to dance. It is not hard to wiggle to just about anything, for I have been dancing just about everything sense I was 13 or so. But my favorite will and always will be some good old bump and grind, being the whitest girl in my school I had to learn to hang. More wine is placed in hand and I just let the music take over my body and put on a show. Hands following my curves, showing off how limber I can be. Kind of a R & B, Latino, stripper thing going on as I move to the beat. He has taken a seat, to sip wine and watch me dance all over the place and him. Picking my leg up and pulling him close, shaking my hips, and grinding ass to crotch. He smiles, "dirty girl" he said with eyes sparkling. I keep working it, and he gets more brave, touching my body, tasting skin, slipping fingers under white french lace boy shorts. A tease I am and just as things get good I find time to push away and give a wonderful little dance just out of arms reach. Love to pick up my hair, and throw looks over my shoulders. Beautifully tanned legs step and mount the man in the chair, grind my rear hard on his dick, open legs and dip, coming back up slowly and hiking up my skirt so ass and lace are all you see. Back to a little bump and grind. He laughs, and chuckles at the little silly sexy things I do. Like put my fingers in my mouth, or touch myself. Dance in front of him and rub my breast on his member, pinch and tease nipples, lick and bite. I am getting a little more then just hot from dancing, and I feel a little trickle of sweat run down my neck and into the valley of my chest. He takes me by the face and kisses me hard, then soft. Hands reach out to touch whatever they can reach, and the kiss deepens. Mouth runs over jaw in ravishing little kisses, down neck and around to the ear. Sucking, licking, nipping, hot breath, contact of skin. Hot and cold sensations, hand full of hair he whips my head back and kisses me harder this time. Whispers in my mouth, "you want it rough? you are a dirty girl tonight." and bends me over the back side of the couch, bares my ass and spanks it twice, one for each cheek. I can't help but gasp, and moan. He drops to his knees and kisses my soft round rear where he just reddened it, and nips it to watch me jump. Then licks my inner thigh, and sneaks a taste under lace. I step away from him turn and ask with my mouth and eyes to follow me up the stairs as I reach around and unzip my skirt.
Author notes
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4445471 Part 2
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4449355 Part 3
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4466361# Part 4
A contest entry
- Make me blush *Adults Only* by sensualbutterfly.
350 points, ended July 28, 2008, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Ecstasy of Movement by MortalPhoenix.
700 points, ended July 30, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - sensuel, sexsual,Erotic by bloodytears20.
880 points, ended January 17, 2009, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh my...I must read on...
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Wow....ew.
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Thanks, did you finish this sexy little tale? You wont be sorry.
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It is very hot, enticing, exciting the reader in preparation for the coming parts. Distracting, but in a good way.
Good write.
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Well read on. Thank you for the comment.
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this was a great poem i did notice a few small boo boo's but other than that it was steal a slamming joint to read congrads on the trophies and many more
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Thank you, I never edit so I am not surprised. Thank you for the comment. Did you read the other 3 parts?
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SEXY, SEXY, SEXY!!!!!
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Thank you. I really enjoyed this. Believe it or not this is a true story. Most of it anyways lol.
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Very Nice
A wonderful start to a story that captures the reader for a must see the next part.
You tell a beautiful story.
I will not miss the rest of the story.
Don
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I typically don't read much erotica stuff because it always sounds the same to me, but this was different. You told you story and developed the feelings and let the reader witness the arousal first hand. It made for a good read and I will read more of your work to see how you develop this.
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This story is very fun, it turns a litte rough. But that is how I like it from time to time. Thank you for your comment! Means a lot to me.
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oh wowwwwwww! now I've got to talk with you missi! lol
too stunned to comment......
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Wow, that was an experience. Quite a read, felt like a bunch of thoughts and feelings just pounding into my mind. Ouch. Think I burned my eyebrows off.
Well penned.
~lost
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I hope you read on? It get hotter.....might need something to keep from burning your skin off lol.
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This is very Hot for the short amount that is here. I see that you have other parts and so one must venture to read the rest.
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Why yes you do have to venture to read more. It gets pretty hot. lol make sure you check it out and let me know what you think?
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When I was making this contest I thought about restricting it to only poems, and this makes my very happy that I didn't. Thanks for entering!
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Well thank you so much. I write about what I live and live what I write. Well for the most part. It was one wild night! Good luck to all in the contest.
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wow naughty in such a lovely way spank spank!
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Thank you very much. Don't forget to read part 2 and 3. 4 will be posted sometime this week. Naughty is my middle name so to speak. lol
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Now that was HOT!! Very, very hot!!! Thanks a bunch for entering it
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As I expected this was the perfect build to Part 2. You have a gift I envy. I'm not very good with this kind of write although I love reading it. You do it very well. Pen on...hopefully to Part 3.
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LOL AT SPIDER! This is a scintrilating write leaving one flush with anticipation
just off to get some pop-corn for the next installment
Definately full with the substance of erotic sensuality. Thank-you for inviting me!
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Sure has my imagination going. Ican't wait to read more and see what happens. A true story hey? You sure know how to dance.
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Boy you can dance!
Now that's dancing, and a true story you say. Well you are a naughty girl, Lucky bastard your man is. I meant that in a nice way. Waiting impatiently for part two now, and I'll know when you finish as you're a favorite. What more can I say...but great story telling. -
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It is a true story, with my own words. In the up coming chapters I will be adding a few things to the real story just for fun. (that and I wished that is what really happened) But yes, what do you think gets to a mans heart faster then food? The most amazing sex ever duh! lol Thank you for the comment and stopping by.
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A nice dance indeed, but what else would come from a free spirited dirty mind? Where is this to go? I'll be waiting for part 2.
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I am sure you cannot wait?
Did it move your member?
That would bring my dirty mind working, LOL
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need three parts..to this one
part two for you; part three for me
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WHEW!
UMM..YEAH, OK THAT WAS A NICE DANCE! YEAH... L.O.L.
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yeah you think? True story. lol
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Another hot story from your pen!
Great stuff and I'll be there as soon as I work out the best way to walk the Atlantic.
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girl, GIRL...!!
you'll finish this, I know, so I can finish the handfull that's 'come up'?! WOW!
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