Alone, sequestered in the cold deep abyss;
Self-exiled, loathsome, struggling dismally.
My captive heart senses something is amiss.
Then, your smile overwhelms me beautifully.
Darling companion, I’ve longed for your kiss;
A whisper of love that drifts ephemerally.
My soul is warmed by the passionate embrace
Of tender emotions on an angel’s face
~ for Stef ~
A contest entry
- 12 Word, Word Bank. by Poetryintheblood.
425 points, ended July 24, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - True Beauty by crazymomma.
1400 points, ended August 19, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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It is wonderful how much a smile can do for others. This is nicely written and just oh so sweet. Thanks for entering and good luck
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That's beautiful! I was really touched by it. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I am glad you enjoyed the poem.
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This is lovely
From the heart and in the joining of two souls feels the embrace of love devine -
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I am glad that you enjoyed this poem. Stef inspires me to write things and touch feelings that I normally tend to ignore.
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awww what a lovely write you have penned for stef.... great jog.... good luck in the contest...... thanks for sharing....
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Thanks. I am glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate you reading my work and your thoughtful comments.
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Lovely write here
This portrays such tenderness and excitment I enjoyed the read
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Thank you for reading and commenting. It was received by my muse as well.
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Thank you for your lovely entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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aww how beautiful so full of sweet emotions loved it!
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Thanks for reading and commenting. I am glad you liked it. I reserved space in the contest just before my internet crashed.
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Warm & mushies!
I will reward my dentist w/ an extra Hermie the Elf figurine/ornament this year to thank her for the bling on my "toofs" ?? haha
Thank You! The words and sentiments are beautiful.
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I am glad you liked the poem. The word bank whispered your name emphemerally when I saw the contest.
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Obviously, my attempts of pronouncing such a word is not my fault - it clearly is the PH instead of the F that is the trip-up. See, just like my name, if they'd just use the appropriate letter... I'm just sayin'
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wonder if the city girls can say it 3 times fast?
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The city is a nice place to visit, but I prefer the naturalness of the country.
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A whisper of love, and the smile that can turn your head. Making an ordinary day seem more important! When one is truely in love! Wonderful expression of love. ~Sie
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Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Her smile is beautiful.
Mike
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This is lovely! So tender and endearing!
Then, your smile overwhelms me beautifully.
Darling companion, I’ve longed for your kiss;
A whisper of love that drifts ephemerally.
My soul is warmed by the passionate embrace
Of tender emotions on an angel’s face
your rhymes and sentiments are just fantastic!
short and perfect
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Thanks. It was a word bank contest that I entered into before my satellite reciever went out. I am glad you liked it.
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Oh its so tender! I loved it
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