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Captive Heart


A beautiful angel
Has taken my heart captive
Embracing my lips
In a plethora of tender kisses
Whispers of love
Breathe onto my soul
Bodies no longer sequestered
Now one with my darling






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Word bank...I guess I used the words pretty typically, but I just wrote what the words provoked from my mind. Enjoy =)

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    Thank you for your lovely entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Beauty Of Silence
    July 18, 2008

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    simple.sweet.intense!

    i love this! love it love it love it! "1. Tolerance with barb wire smiles" omgosh, this just left me breathless... i'm blown away by this one! keep penning kays!

    luvs, Ranji


  • mcrfan322
    July 18, 2008

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    great write... lots of emotion in there... real show for love... word bank was amazing... its a real sweet poem... love poems are my seccond favorite poems.... great job... keep on writing.... 8.5/10

  • hardeepb
    July 18, 2008

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    So beautiful...you used the wordbank well...it's a sweet poem...like first someone took your heart...and then you're forever with that person...amazing.