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wasting wishes

sleepy eyed
i lied wide awake
listening to the cat purr
and fold herself around my feet

the shades are open
hoping for a breeze
on these long hot nights
of fitful rest and undress

eyes spy gold dust
raining down outside
the back window
from the shooting star

one second sooner
or longer
and i could have wished

too late
or early
depending
causes me to stay
tucked in

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prompt is stardust.

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  • islekine
    July 30

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    Well penned!

    I enjoyed your take on the prompt...best wishes in the contest..
    Write on!