Don't know where I've been,
lost in the shadwows.
I know that I'm closed in,
enough is enough.
Misery chases me, I can't run.
Monsters grasping to my memories,
I just want to be done.
Take a breath, a final bow,
It's going to be alright.
Drop the bottle, It's over now,
I'm gone.
Author notes
Well...I think it's a tad sketchy, I've never really done a suicide poem before...Well, option number three...Enjoy
A contest entry
- Jessi-Desensytized a.k.a. BabyChronic0304 *OPTIONS* by Jessi-desensytized.
450 points, ended August 13, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think? Anything I can work on?
Comments
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well i hope you're nott feeling this way!!! its truly not a place you want to be... great poem thanks for entering and good luck in my contest
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hey this is gr8, short but powerful... goodluck in the contest my friend
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Aha, this is a nice poem my friend. I love suicide poems haha Short and sweet, love those. :3 Good luck in the contest! Keep on writing, until you can't no more! :3
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