We two are stars, ablaze; white-hot intensity
delineates our orbits' eccentricity.
Our love, tether of gravity.
We two are earth and sea; at Luna's soft command
your swelling tides embrace and warmly kiss the land.
Our love, caress of surf on sand.
We two are melodies; heartbeats accompany
empassioned strains like two staccato timpani.
Our love, their fugal symphony.
We two are time and space; soft elasticity
binds one unto the next in synchronicity.
Our love, a vast eternity.
We two are day and night; contrasting inks have drawn
the picture twice, one light, one mirrored in ebon.
Our love, pink dusk and blooming dawn.
Constructive critique always welcome
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Superb
Ah, 'tis a fine romantic write indeed. I love the imagery you have created. Rhythm and rhyme just fine.
Welcome back, haven't heard from you for a while.
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