fireflies learn to fly as the time goes by
they swarm around and mate
as thought to debate
on who could love the most
there all so beautiful and never give me a fright
come to think of it scary fireflies
couldnt you just die
thats so funny i almost cried
though it would be a sight
to get a fright
by something flying
by that glowed so bright
I wrote this when a dragonfly flew on mny nose
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this was a fun to read aloud.
i think you should check over your punctuatuions so it cud read much smoother. nice write!! 
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awww chipey your too sweet and choclatey lol
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This line:
"as though to debate on who could love the most"
is very poetic, I just loved it
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im glad you liked it and thanks very much on the comment
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