Living in this melancholy world of mine, I'm pathetic
My existence only bringing pain and suffering
In my mind only sickness and lowliness reside
Drinking to escape the reality I created for myself
I've given up but it doesn't mean I don't care
There is one who cares and loves me completely
Always positive, being there for me in times of need
I feel as if I cause her nothing but sadness
Wishing she would hate me so she could move on and be happier
Finally my actions taking their toll on her, killing her slowly
With her final breath her last words fade from her lips
"You're more amazing than you know, I will always love you"
Tears gently crashing as a new determination is realized and changes my life!
Author notes
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gOziJi-1hHE
Love the whole cd!!! So I hadda write this.
In a list
A contest entry
- Blue October - Hate Me by Barely Breathing.
450 points, ended July 27, 2008, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow, I love the struggle in these words, the amazing emotions you have conveyed. This fits very well with the song, and I love how you've given it more, added to the story that is sung. Great write!
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We are our own tormentor? Hold strong to your determination. You don't like reading and writing?
Right and my name is bananas for brains. -
This is such a great write and totally from the heart. I am glad you like this song, well done and thanks for entering my contest.
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I love this
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Wow. This is amazing. Excellent work, unique. Best of luck in the contest ..
Sammie .. xxx -
The mind
sometimes the mind cajn be a terrible place to visit. love can heal they say. but honest words do not exempt us from the pain. write on young poet for you are not alone.
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