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Singing White Waters

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In natures symphony
stream of life,
through rising waters
winters storms
diminishing levels
summer drought
where clashing
with land and rock
you hear white waters.

On sandy
edge water shores
against winding
fresh water streams
cascading waterfalls
Ocean white cap waves
beach water surf  
typhoon gales
hurricane storms,

Crackling creeks
rock babbling brooks
mountain still
water lakes
gentle shoreline lapping
rushing rivers
fast surging rapids
you hear natures
melodious songs
singing in white waters.
 
 

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  • iamlost gold member
    August 7
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    I loved reading this, each line built up the power, partly because of the words chosen, but also the short length helped them build upon each other. An amazing read, well penned.

    ~lost

  • iamlost gold member
    August 7

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    I loved reading this, each line built up the power, partly because of the words chosen, but also the short length helped them build upon each other. An amazing read, well penned.

    ~lost


  • penman gold member
    July 21

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    Excellent

    Wonderful choice of words for the picture. Done so very well. Congratulations on the honorable mention


  • Swan song gold member
    July 19
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    Excellent this was just flat lovely

  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 18

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    Oh, such a lovely poem. to me, short and sweet. Gets to the point. I love reading poetry like this, truly beautiful plus with a picture. Oh, how I wish I could be this great of a poet. Keep on writing, until you can't no more! *Rose*

    xXDCXx

    ~Make Peace, Not War~ *Rose*

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