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Choose Your God

creeping sickness of man is why we ask
do we all die so fast people kill people
so all in all we are the iner evil

death is justifed with fake righousness
but when true justice is served people turn ther
backs on reality in doing this

man becomes a creater of fake gods
gods of greed gods of rage gods of sex

they are all the same but yet why do

all men make realty of a fake earth
of a sereal planet were there rules
rain and fight to make every one eles

belive ther own belifes when the truth is
that no one belives exactly like a other this is
true all of us have god rether its true or not

but one thing stell stans stell

CHOOSE YOUR GOD WISELY for make a
worng turn your death shall be forever


mmmmmm o yea

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  • DevinCora
    July 18, 2008

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    hmmmm.... i dont really know what was going on in this. i got kinda confused cuz of all the different subjecy descriptions. and i think you over used the word god in that one stanza... it might have flowed better if you would have aseperated them and explained them