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Psycho Mom

She loved her child more than life
Her illness closed in,
The world threatened
She cut off his head with a knife

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  • penman gold member
    July 28

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    Wonderful

    Very creative and well expressed. Such a vivid and powerful image you have penned. Thank you for sharing.


  • grannyeri gold member
    July 24

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    Some males do terrible things to their children, abusing them and making their lives miserable. What mother can stay on the sidelines and watch, once she knows what is going on? Think under the pressure some would break and do what this woman did. Interesting title - psycho or just watching out for her child? Wonder what we would do? Easy to read and understand.


  • Rheea gold member
    July 19
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    His head? gulp hehehehe you go girl.


  • Crazy Coconut gold member
    July 18
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    wicked and scary!!!


  • ticket2write gold member
    July 18
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    Chilling...

    You packed a lot of emotion into four lines. Well done!

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