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My Love, My Own

Well, I can't believe my eyes
When I look in your direction
I'm sequestered here with you
You'll get all my tender affection

You are my beautiful angel
It's you that I adore
I'll whisper my love, my darling
I give you my heart and soul and more

I'll hold you captive in my embrace
Kissing you while the dew drops fall
You fill my entire being
You fulfill my love call

You are my beautiful angel
Come walk through life with me
I will forever love you and keep you
And hold you so tenderly

Author notes

Kiss, embrace, sequester,captive, heart, soul, darling, love, whisper, tender, beautiful, ange. All used in my poem. I also added ly to some words.

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    July 23, 2008
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    Thank you for your lovely entry, good luck in my contest, Josie