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The Beast Within



  thudding hearts bleed
    in the ironic red rust dust of the night

      held close, my winter love
    the past folds in upon itself
  the hills rolling away in memory
    I held you close, not letting you fade away

    sky melted into a sunlit feast,
        scattering halted breath
      ripped from the beast within,
        never forgot you anyways

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.From the Bottom of Both Broken Hearts

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  • ShelleyA gold member
    July 30

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    Nice title. A good write and take on picture prompt. Good imagery, flow and tone. Nice descriptives. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice, alliteration and nice assonance. Thank you for your entry.