Expanding Love~ Senryu chain with seven links
My heart is a bud
Your love is its sunshine
It blooms around you
My heart opens up
It expands out of my chest
Love then overflows
What a precious gift
Constantly expanding love
From your catalyst
Unconditional
What a beautiful feeling
Spiraling outwards
Flying in heaven
No boundaries contain me
Spontaneous love
What freedom there is
When love is spilling from me
What euphoria
O my dearest love
My heart always sings our song
‘I’m following you’
Author notes
The moon is full tonight and so is my heart!
The picture is of Venice but unfortunately
I can't give credit to the artist!!!
It is a beautiful picture!
A contest entry
- I love you... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 27, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is quite beautiful indeed. Love the beauty of the words, and the emotion you have expressed here.
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you have described the various aspects of the beauty of the love...my thanks for sharing such a wonderful write ...
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It's wonderful, good luck in the contest.
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