I've messed up alot in my life.
Done many things I regret.
But if I could have gone back in time.
Here's a few things I would have said.
I'd go back to my toddler days,
Tell myself its ok your not walking yet.
You'll do alot of it when your older.
Go back to my preschool days.
I'd say not to worry about keeping up with the other kids.
Because someday you'll soar above the rest.
Back to grade school.
I'd whisper into my ear.
Dont worry about finding friends.
There's a girl out there somewhere who will be there.
Back to Middle school.
Wrap myself up in a hug and say,
Your beautiful.
Despite what all those other kids say.
If I could go back in time I wouldnt go far.
But I'd stay right here.
Pat myself on the back and say.
Your doing great,
Don't worry about the past.
I think this is one of my best. anyone agree?
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I really like this poem, it's very good! "Back to Middle school.
Wrap myself up in a hug and say,
Your beautiful.
Despite what all those other kids say." I love that line has to be my favorite =]]] Keep up the great work!
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This is great. I loved it. The rhyming was not forced at all, and the ending was amazing.
This poem, I can really relate to.
Great write,
Mel
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That is a genius ending.
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So many things we would tell our younger selves, dont sleep with that guy you will regret it 9 months from now, dont take those pills life gets better, love yourself little girl and other people will love you back, lol I have a lot of those things to say to ... I like this one, I think everyone would do this one "Back to Middle school.
Wrap myself up in a hug and say,
Your beautiful.
Despite what all those other kids say."
and always "dont worry about the past"
wonderful poem.
keep writing, each one is better than the last 
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If I could go back in time I wouldnt go far.
very nice line.
however, you say "alot" as one word when it should be two
and there are a couple instances where you use "your" instead of "you're"
other than that, cute poem!
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