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to Be Finshed

IT A TIMELESS SPACE I HAVE
IT A WASTE OF TIME WITH YOU
you hurt me in many ways
i wish i was a butterfly
THREE WEEKS TO A LIFE
THATS WAT I WANT
i dont desreve better
i need crap in my life

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  • HolyMan28
    July 18
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    This is definitely full of emotion. You write from the heart. Keep it up.
  • Windancer
    July 18
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    so much hurt in one so young

    this is how i started writing
    young love and young pain is so real
  • Windancer
    July 18
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    so muh hurt in one so young