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secrets promise

your veiled mystery appears
in a cloudy blue mist of soft
petals and iris
the light reflects your golden
promise of new life despite a
somber tone
not one will touch the center

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  • Swan song gold member
    July 19
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    Yes very god. Well done poem here


  • Sonja silver member
    July 19

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    Short, profound and deep. One of those what keep us thinking... Thank you for this nice entry.
    ~Sonja~