Hypnotized by your eyes,
the way you look at me.
Your darkness invades me,
I am all-consumed.
Where the light is absent,
your darkness remains.
In the midst of your presence
I forget.
That I shouldn't be near thee,
for you will take over me.
Author notes
Pic is from this contest: http://allpoetry.com/contest/2414503
A contest entry
- ....only for members of the group WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS................. by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
700 points, ended September 16, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Your darkness invades me,
I am all-consumed.
Where the light is absent,
your darkness remains.
loved those lines...and the ending, completing the piece with - for you will take over me, brilliant and perfect
Love what you did with the pic Cuz, thank you so much
Good luck
Cind's
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So true and this is applicable in so many different ways to some many different people in all walks of life. Lovely job on this. Stunning picture.
Warmest,
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Awesome
This is so good, so amazing, I barely have words to describe it. Great work!
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wow what a poem....... darkness does take over... trust me... it has me and is suffocatingme .... thanks for sharingthis and good lcuk in contest.....!
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Excellent
What a powerful and well worded poem. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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oh wow that is a realy great pic to go from good luck you are a great wrighter and i know you can do it
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All the best!
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let me know if its suitable cuz , if not can give you another
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