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my "friend"

"friend"

My family hates me
My life really sucks
Mum wont give me money
I only wanted fifty bucks

I asked for a computer
Dad said no way
I dont know what to do
I can't go on another day

Last night, when I snuck out
I fucked this random guy
Now everyone thinks Im a slut
I really don't know why

I only have one friend
And she hates me too
Nobody likes me
Not even you

Me

Your family loves you
Your life doesnt suck
You get money each week
You don't need another fifty bucks

A computers a big ask
Your Dad was right to say no way
Your a spoilt little brat
And to stuborn to Die today

Last night you got to drinking
Another of those nights
When every sane thought goes away
And all is not alright

You used to have a faithful friend
Who stayed by your side
But then someone "better" came along
And I was thrown aside

Author notes

This "friend" is some one who used to be my best friend...There were so many things I ignored...like the disgusted looks she gave me if I said something,did something she didnt like, or that everything good I did like a drawing or something, was met with insults on the little bad things, or that she never listened and always complained....

Anyhow these are the kinds of things she said...And what I never said but always thought

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  • L2pwn
    August 14
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    whos your "friend" amy lee?

  • spideracer gold member
    July 19

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    I liked the transition between "friend" and "Me", well constructed piece of poetry. Sad that your friend said all those things to you, anyway that's her loss as I reckon you write well for a 15 year old. Now take care you hear.