Please forgive me for you are my world
from the moment we met my heart sang this hymn,
now it plays endlessly just for you
and this fire deep inside me will never dim.
I grasp your love greedily to this barren heart
for I've waited so long to feel complete,
with such hunger I want you all to myself
I have a thirst for you that is oh so sweet.
Be the one who will walk forever by my side
for I've waited what seems like an eternity,
we will grow together within love's golden light
always with you, this is my guarantee.
So if I seem too eager, I hope you'll understand
for to find what we have is worth holding on,
I know you feel it when I'm in your arms
as you and I face this resplendent new dawn.
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6. Selfish Heart
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A contest entry
- S Titles Contest! by Midnight-x-Rose.
450 points, ended July 23, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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We all want a bit of love and sometimes we can appear selfish, as we want someone, but it's human nature really to really wish and hope for someone special. As long as you think of the other person as well.
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Excellent
wow, what an amazing creation. So terrific for the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
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Sounds to me like a very unselfish heart! A beautiful piece that speaks of such deep love.. having never felt this before I can only imagine!
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Precious~
Excellent take on the prompt!
Second stanza grabs~
Love the rhyme too
The words: barren heart
so grabs
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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beautiful
just beautiful dear poet. the heart cries out.
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