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love robs lovers hearts

heart left distant shores
a dove crossed oceans,
find a pure love, bask in it's warmth


Prince saw the dove from other shore
gave his heart,grew very fond of
both are strangers joined by love
free of social hang overs


prince fended her
neglected the kingdom
power of love relieves everything,
dove had her stories prince listened
empathised with 'I love you'often


dove had to leave making his heart heavey
prince did not forsee
for his mind filled, with doves sweet lullabies




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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 27, 2008

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    what a wonderful scenario of the love is sketched in such a warm poetry...well done..and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful write ...


  • whos my humblepie
    July 18, 2008

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    oh how cute....
    this so sweet Ven.