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No Ending

Missing image

 

 

 

 

if reality wore desire,
I would be dressed in you

flesh covered with hands
of sensual pleasure,
seeking now on waves
of climatic importance

eyes cloaked by clouds
of tomorrows promises

while whispers played Dylan
entwining tendrils of ebony,
unable to find
a beginning or an end







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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    September 10, 2008

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    Love the opening lines Juls
    Perfect

    Sensual, almost edible descriptions within, you have penned some great poetic thoughts from the picture

    Thank you so much and good luck

    CInd's

  • everhopeful
    July 25, 2008

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    no beginning or end...so true and it just keeps getting better...not that I speak from experience...love tis a wonderous thing
    best of luck

  • imahealer
    July 22, 2008

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    And what a beautiful outfit that would be! Forever dressed and drenched in unconditional love. Reality tells a different tale, and you used that word very well in your first line. Oh, to feel the fire, with one person for a lifetime would certainly be grand, and your poem says just that. Best wishes in contest!

    Linda


  • leo2
    July 19, 2008

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    In my opinion, this is the way love should be.. 'no beginning or end'. I hope you do well in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


    • fortyninereasons gold member
      July 19, 2008
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      thanks for stopping by and reading my piece. I agree, love shouldnt have a beginning or an end, love is infinity.


  • Cannonsfire
    July 18, 2008
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    Oh I can't wait for what you do with this, especially after a few red wines LOLOL


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    July 18, 2008
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    let me know if it's too sensual

    or if u just want another one lol

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