At first sight you see a perfect girl.
One who has done nothing wrong, ever.
She knows how to be seductive,
But also stay a protective virgin.
Now look past her beautiful jaded eyes.
Look inside her for her hidden sins.
The ones she hid from you,
But not others.
Is she still a perfect girl?
Or is she filled with secret sins?
The answer is of your decision.
Author notes
picture inspiration - http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2414/477.jpg?1216363734
Picture credit - Behind Your Illusion II by littlemewhatever
Okay weird poem. Started out like a poem, then descriptive like, and ended up into like a question or something. But also this poem is very true about some people. If you think about it.
A contest entry
- Mesmerizing picture #2 (PIF) by notorious.
789 points, ended July 19, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - prewrites by aeolia.
400 points, ended October 26, 2008, 130 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Jaded Innocence (Picture Inspired) by High-on-Death.
300 points, ended October 1, 2008, 5 entries
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I like the idea of deception and 'secret sins'.
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Maybe you're special and she doesn't want to hurt you... I've been this girl and I've seen what I've done... Nice piece.
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"protective virgin."
LoL...nice adjective choice with 'protective'.
"hidden sins."
I like that. =P
Definitely intriguing and provocative. Thanks so much for entering. -
we all know she is filled with secret sins.
I liek that phrase though<33
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Thank you. I took one look at the picture for the contest and that phrase popped right into my head. ^^
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