white heat melts
as skin glows red,
hands slide
omnipresent
to directional thoughts
felt by two hearts
and one pulse
thrum is contagious
in the heat of disease
and fingers feel
the temperature rise
Author notes
Got a thermometer anyone!
In a list
A contest entry
- Adult {{Picture Inspired}} Semi - Quickie by PerfectImperfection.
600 points, ended July 27, 9 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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A very nice take on the image prompt here! Thoughtful, and intriguing. I especially enjoyed:
"white heat melts"
.. great intro to thought here ..
"hands slide
omnipresent"
.. great phrasing here, powerful ..
Very well penned. Thank you for your entry!
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i'd say this was more like 110 degrees
okay, 120
God, wouldn't you just KILL to find yourself in this position??? lol
Grrrrr....I need a man.
Love, Lane
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Mine just broke from the sizzling! O' what I wouldn't give to be in love again like this. Good luck in the contest.
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Thermometer...LoL, your ANs can truly be witty.
"omnipresent"
LoL..never associated this word with anything dirty...but wow, this word works so well, considering the err, context.
"directional thoughts
felt by two hearts
and one pulse"
Math has never been this sexy, right? "directional thoughts" is nice.
"in the heat of disease"
Disease has never been that hot either...
LMAO
Good luck FireShooter
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Love this...so soft. The prompt is very romantic and you caught it with your words.
"felt by two hearts
and one pulse"
Nothing more true than that. simple structure and once again, the italic font adds to the softness.
"in the heat of disease
and fingers feel
the temperature rise"
Great way to end this...some might say anti-climatic but it's just a very intuitive ending; everyone knows what would come after this part, yet you kept it sensual. I love it. Good look in the contest!
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Hey.. This is pretty amazing. The picture suits your write excellently. Well done and best of luck in the contest =)
All the best,
Sammie .. xxxx -
Psssss hot! Ouch, I think I just burnt myself! LOL! Nicely penned dear, a real scorcher this is and all the best in the contest.
Love and peace always,
mj.
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Tis very warm indeed. Nice work.
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lol so hot infact i forgot to capitalise the 'h' I'll be right back!
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..... looks around and 'pkdfss' on you
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0.o
ahhh!!!
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brings a hose to put you out!
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im not on fire, im blind now! 
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I can find you a guide dog
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make it pretty..even though i cant see it
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ok it will be cute and fluffy with a little button nose
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I'll give you a white cane to help you get around!
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why white?
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ok.... I will make it a candy cane... red and white striped!!
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