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Where am I?





Hello, look up, its meee-ow whoops!

Well I am just a kitten,
with silky grey fur,
and if you can find me,
for you I will purr!

Have you looked in the garden?
It's where I will play,
chasing the shadows
on a warm summers day.

What about the kitchen?
It’s where I choose,
To hide in the corner

Chewing your shoes.

Am I under your duvet?
All hidden away,
tickling your feet
as in bed you lay.


But I said look up!
There you’ll see me,
Way out of reach

At the top of this tree!


Please HELP me, I’m stuck!

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  • Antipodi
    June 19

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    O my Pussycat this is so cute and the imagery in the mind of your kitten is exceptionally impish and delightful a poem that deserved a cup


  • toomysterious
    July 25, 2008
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    This is a very sweet poem about a kitten. They are always so much fun.


  • A slave to passion gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    another fine job

    animals seem to lighten up the moment don't they. thanks for a nice read really all the gloom and doom gets to me
  • Going Forever
    July 18, 2008
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    very nice poem!

    good luck in the contest!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    July 18, 2008

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    Awww this is just precious and I am sure that she will enjoy it goodluck to you in her contest best wishes and much love always

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