Quiet, unbending
heat wraps the cricket's chirping
under termite wings.
Author notes
Well, it's June, still and hot, and the termites are out in the quiet night alive with the steady chirping of crickets. Username: hawaiiansolt
PS: not sure why we have to put our username here, isn't it attached to the poem?
A contest entry
- Haiku Contest --- for 'Visions through Haiku' Members only. (Application link inside) by Harrisham Minhas.
475 points, ended July 28, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for your Haiku:
Quiet, unbending
heat wraps the cricket's chirping
under termite wings.
This brings to mind the sound of the cricket.
Well-crafted Haiku.
Thanks again.
Harrisham Minhas
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