Standing on the brink,
hesitating;
the past is a wall.
©2008
July 18, 2008
A contest entry
- Describe yourself in ten words (once more again ^^) by Noir mariposa...x.
1000 points, ended July 18, 28 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
A critical comment is invited
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WOW, Just give me a minute to get my thoughts back in order.
ok back now, this is great with such vivid imaginary and emotions.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you. Pretty well describes my life.
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I likes a lot ^^
Original, creative and easy too relate too
Awesome job!
Thank you for entering,
I wish you the best of luck!
Claire x
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Thank you. It was a stretch keeping it to ten words.
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I struggled when I first entered mine all those months ago
But it's worth it
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-- I'll be back in about an hour, msg me when you're done? Claire x --
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The entry itself is finished; I am just fixing the background.
Thank you.
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