Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Artistic Leeway


in the half light of silence
I closed my unseeing eyes
as mud became rock and underneath
laid our story, lain in thrift,
tough as an axe handle
and fragile as daylight.

descent into the inevitable invisible,
where the memory of you lingers,
suspended from above
like a piece of art --

    you can find me
    in the dreamer’s lounge
    face down in the gutter
    where your stone is cold --

and when love decides to find me
and I open my eyes




let it be you.

Author notes

For anna

Prompt: 8-"Waiting but not alone, for you are the beat within my heart, and the smile upon my face, reassuring me that we can make it" Stephanie Wood

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5
  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    July 19
    Edit | Reply
    lovely....best of luck

    Tasha

  • Aww.. wow.. that's wonderful!! I hope it happens!

    Excellent write!

  • You should never deny what your heart truly wants... Or blind yourself or anyone else from the truth of it. Nice write!

  • awww wow, this is awesome daddy, so glad you entered
    the ending was superb with lovely descriptions laced around this poem
    thanks for entering and good luck
    stephanie ♥

  • Anna Kay
    July 18
    Edit | Reply
    This is so very beautiful, I'm actually at loss for words.

1 - 5 of 5