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Little old me!

A solitary feather

Caught and lifted

By a gentle breeze.

In a list

A contest entry

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  • The Drifter
    August 14, 2008

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    Little old me!

    I think all of us has wished to be lifted by the wind and carried to another place or just to float forever.
    Very good.


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    July 18, 2008
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    Hmmm, I remember reading this somewhere before... I don't think i was in the conscience world though ... *frowns*

    Perhaps in a dream, but that's sorta odd
    I loved it then and I still do, the wording brilliant ^^

    Thank you for entering!
    I wish you luck
    Claire x


  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    July 18, 2008

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    Sweet and gentle.

    This poem makes me feel as if you showing the world a different side to nature; as if its a lullaby, but that could be me.

    Great work and I wish you all the best in the contest.

    Rose


  • TyrannyForestFairy
    July 18, 2008

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    Just lovely, a beautiful and gentle description. I love the metaphor nice work mum!

    ~Emily~ xx