Infected, infested;
I am [nothing]
but forged signatures of myself.
In a list
A contest entry
- Describe yourself in ten words (once more again ^^) by Noir mariposa...x.
1000 points, ended July 18, 2008, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I think ~I can relate this one personally myself, as it sounds like something I would say about myself.
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This is very powerful. I love the last line. Really reflects the lost identity of the confused and hurting soul. Reminds me a of a poem I wrote, with the same theme, only a very different style (Mirror Mask, if you ever want to check it out) The last line will no doubt linger with me for a while. I can see why you won a trophy for this. It is very powerful. Congratulations on that trophy, and thank you for entering my contest and letting me read this.
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I like this.
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This is a powerful write in so few words. I think we all have felt this way about ourselves at one time or another. Thanks for entering my contest. Blessings, Patty
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This is nicely written. I like the way you let your feelings flow. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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beautiful, caring;
you are {everything}
but forged signatures of yourself.
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this is so sad darlin.
congrats on the HM.
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GOOD choice of words like she said.
forged signatures of yourself...
very clever I like it.
cool!
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good choice of words
but so untrue......... you are precious beautiful and sweet to me. Love you , Daddy
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You used the words to their best effect. Lovely write, you deserved the trophy!
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Wow
This is short but each word means alot
Really good write
Well done
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wow this is amazing and mind gripping. the wording is perfect and leaves the reader in a mist of thoughts. well done
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you are all this... and you've managed to describe "you" (yourself) in just 10 words... for that a huge applause for you!
Congratz with the HM.
Blessed be
Blanche
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Wow. Excellent. Congratulations on the trophy, although I personally think this write deserved a higher ranked trophy. Well done though =)
Sammie .. xxx -
I love the lines;
I am [nothing]
but forged signatures of myself.
It seems so harsh to think of yourself like that but at the same time it is brutal honosty.
I lovely write and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Rose
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In one way this is rather sad and in another this is quite interesting.
I loved the wording of:
"I am [nothing]
but forged signatures of myself."
Great write
Thank you for entering and good luck!
Claire x -
interesting use of words to
speak of yourself
best of luck to you
Riftkin
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