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taken back to my sweet paris

 

 

 

 

 

i am

a state of mind

unsounded

 

as i am taken

back to my sweet

paris nights unblinded

 

and the bumping

rhythm of my spine oh-so-hot

 

i am a lover

waiting by the river

 

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will be completely revamped at end of contest; i have a full tale for this one. this is just a part, truly.

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    August 4

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    Well deserving of the Gold...so beautiful and soft in flow and meaning...great metaphor in elegance and passion...
    Lovely!
    mystic


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    August 1

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    Oh!!! I really loved this! you did such a wonderful job! it's sensual yet it has this.. beat to it!! The metaphors tht you used are so wonderful!!! bravo!! thank you very much for sharing!!I really enjoyed reading this! Best of luck!


    Angel

  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    July 18

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    Oh, but this is a beautiful sensual jaunt with a strong poetic stride.