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Ordinary

Simplistic complexity,
baffling intrigue,
violent tranquility,
my own private league.

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Just me in a nutshell

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    July 20, 2008

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    excellent poem. hmm excellent word choice. I love the opening line and everything in between..

    kat


  • Hello...No.One.Home silver member
    July 18, 2008

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    WOW you've set my head a-spin

    Great work and i love the line;

    Simplistic complexity,


    Well done and I wish you all the best in this contest.

    Rose


  • shecantstopfalling.
    July 18, 2008
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    I like this...good choice of words....very good


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    July 18, 2008
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    What an interesting use of words, quite original too which I LOVE ^^
    >> my own private league <<

    Loved that ending

    Thank you for entering and I wish you the best of luck!
    Claire x


  • Soft-Rain
    July 18, 2008
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    A clever contradition of yourself loved the way you are two parts of you!

    Great words!


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 18, 2008
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    interesting use of words to
    speak of yourself

    best of luck to you

    Riftkin

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