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House Boatin'

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Sitting on top of my boat
watching the misses float,
Dinner time come on ya'll
dine with us, it'll be a ball.

One quick turn on the lake
fun lovin' is what we make,
beer drinkers and rabbit eaters
all on one side the house teeters.

Bed upstairs in lovers nest
best lovin' ever, I will attest.

Author notes

Picture B... Credit Photobucket


Yeah I let the inner redneck out to have some fun. This was a great picture.. Almost went over the 10 line limit until I rechecked it and was like uh oh.. Gotta shorten it alil lol.


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  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 20
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    Congratulations

    Congratulations on the well-deserved award---
    Well Done!!


    • Midnight Raeven silver member
      July 20
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      LOL Thanks. I love when I can find these funny ones, I am not so good at it, but every now and then I let the inner redneck loose and it comes out well.

      Midnight Raeven

  • Desire gold member
    July 20

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: House Boatin'
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Laughing so hard at the second line: watches the misses float The second stanza- all on one side with the house teeters
    I could see where the song: Rock the Boat came from
    What happened to them there possummmmm Wowzers You have serious shindig with a lover's nest and then tsunami warning for the neighboring outhouses

    Excellent take on the prompt~
    Funny images You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Humor also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


    • Midnight Raeven silver member
      July 20
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      lmao.. Possum stew was gonna be in it, but you had a ten line limit...I couldn't make it fit right.

      Glad you enjoyed it so much!!!!

      YAY for the bronze go ME!

      Midnight Raeven

  • Sun Singer silver member
    July 18

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    Awww...reminds me of back home in Porterville. Nicely written sweetie.


    • Midnight Raeven silver member
      July 18
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      Glad you liked it Rae lol.. I was stoned outa my mind last night when I wrote it and thought it was a funny contest to enter

      Midnight

  • Disturbed Prodigy
    July 18

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    first, WTF!!!!, but i think this is something i like this poem, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest

    • Midnight Raeven silver member
      July 18
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      lmao Aaron, this was fun to write and I am glad you liked it.

      WTF is always a good response!

  • blueyez
    July 18

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    lol rockin the boat eh? nice!!!!!!!!


    • Midnight Raeven silver member
      July 18
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      Hope it made you smile. I know you need a good smile right now..

      It was fun to write!
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