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The importance of Me, in ten whole words...


   With child,
                  

                        still my soul is spontaneous,

                        giving, kind-natured.

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  • Margaret Denham gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    Ten words which say so much honey.

    Yes, you're spontaneous...more than anyone I've ever known. Being kind-natured and giving are attributes which come naturally to you.

    Love you

    Mum


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    August 6, 2008
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    Beautiful words..

    In just 10 words, you have sure said alot. This was terrific!


  • stavykm gold member
    July 19, 2008

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    Just Beautiful

    Yes and this is so you. Excellent job in just 10 words.
    Best of luck in the contest.
    Much Love
    Aunty Kelle


  • azlyn gold member
    July 18, 2008
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    Blessed be!!!

    I can't wait to be a great Aunty!!!

    Love you~
    Aunty Az


  • notorious
    July 18, 2008

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    How true!!
    "With child"
    I wouldn't expect any poem describing yourself not to mention this.

    "kind natured"
    A hyphen's looking for a good home here.

    Love the b/g color BTW (:


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 18, 2008

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    this is beautiful and you are an amzing person . i cant wait to meet my new neice ill be an auntie lol


  • plainoljoe
    July 18, 2008
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    definetly excellent reasons to feel good about yourself--all of which are true

    Joe


  • Hello...No.One.Home silver member
    July 18, 2008

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    Beautiful, sweet and from the heart.

    I love this poem and the imaginary that comes with every word.

    I wish you all the luck in this contest.

    Rose


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    July 18, 2008

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    Beautifully penned, this is very sweet. I'm glad too see people being optimistic about themselves, I think yours takes the cake with that from what I've read so far

    Thank you for entering and I wish you luck!
    Claire x


  • PerfectImperfection
    July 18, 2008

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    This is lovely! Hopeful and woven with smile of heart. Confidant, compassionate, and bold. Beauty spoken in few words. Best wishes in the contest!


  • Soft-Rain
    July 18, 2008
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    This is sweetly you my dear friend!

    Great words!


  • SuicidalLover
    July 18, 2008

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    Well I hope you will forever be a kindered spirit. We need more of you. Best of luck my
    ~Kystal Angel


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 18, 2008
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    interesting use of words to
    speak of yourself

    best of luck to you

    Riftkin


  • Angelflower
    July 18, 2008

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    All true!! and beauiful and an angel and yeah!!! heaven on earth me thinks best of luck sissy!

    Angel

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