pull my body close yours
put your hand down toward my'
legs and thighs.
turn me around and been me back
and make me touch my toe.
lay me down on the for spin me around
pick me up throw me in the air and catch me.
drop me down between your legs and pull me
back up again and look at me in the eyes.
grab me and hold me close to your body and
let me rap my leg's around
and spin me around.
notice me as i am sweating and your hand touching
all over my body and gripping me hard.
body to body and shoulder to shoulder
pull me around the floor as my body play limp
and pull me back up again.
hold on to me spin as you spin me around
and catch my leg's as i put it in the air.
the tango is the dance of sex.
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Nicely done...
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Nice
dance images. I love to Tango.
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honey i really love this poem
i am really melting
you are really a great writer
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There seem to be a few places that the grammer is really off, and the spelling. The poem it self is lovely and I understand where it was headed, it is sensual and sexy. I love to Tango!!!!! Have someone proof read for you, I do it myself. We know what and how our poems are to be read so we over look the things others will not miss. Good luck.
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I think you meant to add 'to' in the first line, but maybe I'm wrong. Nice imagery anyway, very intense.
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Very nice imagery. Thanks for entering
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