on a rainy day
tumbling over her face
a fountain of bliss
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Author notes
ID: mina nagi
Dedicated to those who love rain including me lol...
Picture with the courtsey of Photo.search
A contest entry
- Haiku Contest --- for 'Visions through Haiku' Members only. (Application link inside) by Harrisham Minhas.
475 points, ended July 28, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I'm always interested to read new haiku.
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perfection!
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exquisite imagery
'a fountain of bliss'-happiness in the air-a perfect picture of sheer happiness-very relating -exquisite imagery
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Thank you for your Haiku:
on a rainy day
tumbling over her face
a fountain of bliss
That's a beautiful and vivid Haiku with a feeling of freshness.
Rains are wonderful.
Thanks again.
Harrisham Minhas
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Hi mina, wonderful haiku! And a beautiful background!I can feel the raindrops on my face.It's so beautiful that the photo is not necessary at all. Good luck in the contest.
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wow! nice haiku background is perfect
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hey this is absolutely great!!!! fantastic, beautiful and serene!! nice to read u after such a long time.
good luck in the contest.
-Neha
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For the past few weeks, its been raining here a lot, monsoon rains.. Well and I've been writing a lot about Rain as well. And Im totally a lover of rain.. lol! so I guess, this one is for me
Beautiful haiku, i dont remember you writing those a lot.. but here you did so well, and a cute background to go with it.. Loved the last line the most.. Keep writing! 
Love,
Lonely
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