Aching words fill her head
Pain throbbing through her
Cobwebs wrap achingly
Around her heart
Squeezing tighter
Whispered paragraph of words
Move over pure skin
Dead in there blackness
Each carved in by a knife
That lies within her breast
Safe from harm
Can you hear her inner screams
That echo ; tremble
Hear her broken voice
For she forever places others first
When will anyone see through the words
And see her pain
Author notes
http://darkclub.deviantart.com/art/Until-the-limit-of-sorrow-92003985
A contest entry
- ....only for members of the group WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS................. by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
700 points, ended September 16, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
this comes from my thawing heart.. can you hear it beat?
Comments
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wow sissy this is just so strong with emotion and depth
i love each and every line, the words you used, how it was so easy to read but so easy to feel too
brilliant work on the pic
Thanks and good luck
Cind's
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This is just really sad to me sigh
I hope that you do well in the cointest best wishes and much love always
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This so touched my heart Sweetie...wrought in pain...very well done on the picture dear!many and good luck!
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http://darkclub.deviantart.com/art/Until-the-limit-of-sorrow-92003985
let me know if it's not okay, can get ya another
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